-still needs development of the ground plane and charged with more activity that I suspect would be important -the reliance on the DMZ label is something you should step away from; it reinforces the vacuous nature of that ground level and highlights potential gaps in knowing what goes on in the DMZ -why is everyone committed to making their experiential sections so morose and emo?; this reads like it should be about the building at night or at the very least that the designer is not aware of how much light (natural and artificial) come into play off the streets outside the building -what happened to the opportunities with watercolour?; or is that the reason why it is dark?
-still needs development of the ground plane and charged with more activity that I suspect would be important
ReplyDelete-the reliance on the DMZ label is something you should step away from; it reinforces the vacuous nature of that ground level and highlights potential gaps in knowing what goes on in the DMZ
-why is everyone committed to making their experiential sections so morose and emo?; this reads like it should be about the building at night or at the very least that the designer is not aware of how much light (natural and artificial) come into play off the streets outside the building
-what happened to the opportunities with watercolour?; or is that the reason why it is dark?