Thursday, April 11, 2013

Experiential Section


2 comments:

  1. -unfortunately the section does not really emphasize the lighting conditions that ideally dominate your design; the centralized condition as an illuminated element by night and light source by day is not clear in the imagery especially given the surrounding uniformity of the darkness
    -the large expanses of uniform or empty space is a bit cumbersome as they do not do much more than come across as a bit unfinished; instead you could have articulated material properties, lighting, activity, ambiance, and other effects that would have been just as important in the proposal of an experiential section without having to force "filling up" of these spaces

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